Isis ([info]isiscolo) wrote in [info]ds_flashfiction,

Whitehorse Holiday, by Isis ([info]isiscolo)

Whitehorse Holiday, by Isis ([info]isiscolo)
Fraser/RayK, PG, 970 words
Thanks to [info]riverlight for beta-reading. This is based on Chicago Holiday, which you can probably tell from the title, huh?


The first set had gone well, Christina thought. She had to give her agent credit; when he'd first suggested a tour of western Canada, she'd thought he was nuts, but the people there were gratifyingly polite and actually listened to her singing and David's piano playing, instead of just talking louder so they could hear each other over the music. And they bought more CDs than the people in Ottawa and Toronto, too. Maybe they just didn't get a lot of good jazz singers out here in the sticks. Whatever it was, they treated her like she was something special, and she liked it.

She drank her first glass of water quickly, but as the bartender handed her another, she noticed a man approaching. She set down the water and gave him a practiced smile, calibrated to be just friendly enough without being overly encouraging.

"Miss Nichols," the man said warmly. "I never expected you'd become an entertainer, but you're quite talented. I'm impressed."

"I'm sorry, do I know you?" He didn't look familiar, and as far as she knew she didn't know anybody in Whitehorse. But he was older than her, probably forty or so - maybe he was one of her father's friends, someone from the government.

He put out a hand, and she shook it automatically. "Benton Fraser. Although you might remember me as…Chicago."

Her hand flew to her mouth. "Oh my God! Chicago!" The Mountie who'd been assigned to look after her - God, it seemed so long ago. Seven years ago? Eight? "I can't believe you remember. In fact, I'm kind of embarrassed you remember. I was just a kid."

"Wise for your years."

"Or trying to pretend I was, anyway." She shook her head. "I really put you through hell, didn't I?"

"Part of the job," he said. "But it all turned out all right in the end."

"I guess," she said, taking a gulp of water. "I still can't believe you're here." Then she gave him a side-long glance. He wasn't wearing that ridiculous red uniform, but he still looked immaculate, straight-backed and solid in jeans and a pale blue dress shirt. There was a ring on his left hand; he must have gotten married, then. Probably had the regulation two-point-five kids and a doting stay-at-home wife. And he was wearing a tie. Nobody wore a tie to a nightclub. "Not just that it's been so long. It's just hard to believe that you're here," she said, gesturing to take in the room.

"I'd never intended Chicago to be a permanent home. I've been stationed here in Whitehorse for some years."

"I don't just mean Whitehorse. I mean, here here. The 'Lizard Lounge'." She made little quotes in the air with her fingers; it was a silly name. "I remember how you were in that club in Chicago. Nightclubs just don't seem like your kind of scene."

"True, they're not," he said, nodding toward her in acknowledgment. Yeah, it wasn't too hard to figure that Fraser wasn't a nightclub sort of guy. She remembered him as stiff and strait-laced, all prim and proper. Straight as an arrow. Like a knight out of a fairy tale, or at least, that was what he had been for her. Hopefully she hadn't done him too much damage, making him chase her all around the seamiest parts of Chicago. She had to suppress a giggle, remembering him in the fetish bar. Lord, that had been something.

"But I saw your name in the newspaper, and I wanted to see if Christina Nichols of the Christina Nichols Band was the same girl who had given me such an - interesting time in Chicago," Fraser continued. "And of course, Ray was delighted to have the opportunity to go out."

"Ray?"

He gestured toward one of the tables lining the edges of the dance floor, catching the eye of a blond man who rose and walked over toward them with an easy grace. He was about Fraser's age, she guessed, but had a wilder look about him. Yeah, he probably went to nightclubs a lot.

Ray nodded to her as he approached. "Nice voice you got there," he said. He sounded American.

"My partner, Ray," said Fraser.

"Oh, you're a Mountie, too?" Huh, guess he was Canadian after all. She'd heard so many accents as a child, traveling around with her father. She thought she was pretty good at identifying them, but sometimes she got them wrong.

But Fraser was shaking his head. "My partner," he repeated meaningfully; and it was then that she noticed that Ray wore a ring, too, a simple silver band that looked identical to the one Fraser wore.

"Oh," she said dumbly. "Yeah, I get it." And it was obvious, the way they looked at each other. Like there wasn't anybody else in the room that mattered. She looked Ray in the eyes and grinned. "Listen, I got my next set coming up," she said. "You take care of Chicago here, okay?"

There was no reason Ray would have known what she meant, but it looked like he did, anyway, because he nodded. "I always do."

"Nice seeing you again," she said to Fraser, and he and Ray went back to their table.

She tossed back the rest of the water in her glass and headed back out to the microphone. At the piano, David caught her eye, and she nodded, and he started the next number. She looked out into the smoky bar, looking for Fraser's table. There he sat, he and Ray, and as the first notes of the piano went spiraling into the room she could see the two of them, looking into each other's eyes and smiling.

You're not so much of a straight arrow after all, Chicago, she thought, as she started to sing.
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[info]the_antichris

October 22 2006, 03:52:21 UTC 5 years ago

This is great! Christina's one of my favourite one-off characters.

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:18:52 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! I just watched these eps last week and the idea immediately popped into my brain.

[info]mondschein1

October 22 2006, 04:36:04 UTC 5 years ago

Awwww, Christina. He is a straight arrow, but he is a bent straight arrow, see? *attempts to teach her the ways of the Fraser*

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:19:06 UTC 5 years ago

Hee, a bent(on) straight arrow!

[info]china_shop

October 22 2006, 04:36:30 UTC 5 years ago

Aw, yay! This is great! ♥

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:19:16 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

[info]purpig21

October 22 2006, 04:44:17 UTC 5 years ago

AWWWWWW, you hit some of my fave buttons here. I love established F/K, and one of my fave eps was Chicago Holiday.

So very nice to see her again. and know Ben and Ray are so happy up in Canada.

Excellent work!

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:19:41 UTC 5 years ago

Aw, yay. I just saw that ep and the idea popped into my head.

[info]springwoof

October 22 2006, 04:50:13 UTC 5 years ago

yay!

I liked Chicago Holiday, and it was neat to see what you did with it! (love Fraser & Ray "married" fics)

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:20:00 UTC 5 years ago

Re: yay!

Thank you kindly!

[info]pearl_o

October 22 2006, 07:49:08 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, I really enjoyed this!

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:20:13 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks!

[info]cardalia

October 22 2006, 07:55:58 UTC 5 years ago

Lovely!I really liked Christina, I wish people used her more. And nothing makes a girl happier than Fraser and Ray together in Canada.

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:20:49 UTC 5 years ago

Hee, I don't know if there are any other Christina stories, but I enjoyed the ep a lot and the idea immediately hit.

[info]delurker

October 22 2006, 08:20:48 UTC 5 years ago

How lovely!

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:21:11 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! (And having just read your post, I can tell you that this is perfectly sufficient. :-)

[info]delurker

5 years ago

[info]eledhwenlin

October 22 2006, 09:22:59 UTC 5 years ago

Awwwwww. Christina was so cute. :D

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:21:21 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

[info]revbiscuit

October 22 2006, 09:45:10 UTC 5 years ago

What a nice suprise to wake up to! I really liked her, and I can see her as a jazz singer. Really nice story. I've been eyeing up this challenge with a lot of curiosity, it's good to see how these other characters can be given lives of their own.

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:22:48 UTC 5 years ago

It was fun imagining what she would have become. I wanted something that her father would disapprove of, that would make her feel like she was striking out on her own. And I was heavily influenced by the Holly Cole Trio's presence in the Chicago Holiday eps.

I am also enjoying reading the stories for this challenge and hope that a few more get posted before it's over.

Anonymous

October 22 2006, 10:02:36 UTC 5 years ago

Very nice.I like the seeing Fraser through someone else's eyes.I do think this is how he appears to other people.

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:23:50 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you. I have a real love for stories that show the relationship between characters through someone else's viewpoint.

[info]allzugern

October 22 2006, 10:10:19 UTC 5 years ago

What a great snapshot from the future. It is exactly as I would expect things to be. Using Christina and her POV here worked beautifully; it made the scene feel natural - not a forced set of circumstances.

Thanks for posting this :-)

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:24:21 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you very much! I think you've put your finger on what I was trying to do exactly, a "snapshot from the future."

[info]sam80853

October 22 2006, 11:41:49 UTC 5 years ago

Christina, yes! And a ring, YES!!!

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:24:41 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! And hee, it seems a lot of people love the established relationship stories!

[info]akite

October 22 2006, 12:01:37 UTC 5 years ago

"But I saw your name in the newspaper, and I wanted to see if Christina Nichols of the Christina Nichols Band was the same girl who had given me such an - interesting time in Chicago,"

Hee! Such tact, Fraser. Great story!

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:25:31 UTC 5 years ago

Heh. He's that way through the whole episode, acting as though it's all in a day's work. Most people would want to strangle her!

Thank you very much!

[info]grey853

October 22 2006, 13:24:04 UTC 5 years ago

Nice story. I love to think of Ray and Fraser together, going out, looking into one another's eyes, out for the world to see as partners.

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:25:42 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

[info]primroseburrows

October 22 2006, 14:49:30 UTC 5 years ago

Aww. *pictures Fraser with 2.5 kids*


Very nice story. :)

[info]isiscolo

October 22 2006, 17:25:58 UTC 5 years ago

It's the .5 part that's really hard. :-)

[info]mergatrude

October 22 2006, 23:36:24 UTC 5 years ago

Yay! A lovely idea.

[info]isiscolo

October 23 2006, 01:27:25 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

[info]lilac_one

October 23 2006, 01:17:10 UTC 5 years ago

Well done, as usual, my friend. Thank you.

[info]isiscolo

October 23 2006, 01:27:39 UTC 5 years ago

Aw, you are very kind. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[info]viciouswishes

October 23 2006, 06:14:12 UTC 5 years ago

That was really quite cute.

[info]isiscolo

October 23 2006, 15:18:59 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

[info]proserpina_kore

October 23 2006, 10:22:40 UTC 5 years ago

It's nice to be reminded so enjoyably of eps that I haven't seen for a long while - thanks, lovely story :-)

[info]isiscolo

October 23 2006, 15:19:32 UTC 5 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it. I just saw the Chicago Holiday eps last week, myself, so this quickly came to mind.

[info]marialima

October 23 2006, 12:05:00 UTC 5 years ago

Sweet! I always like 3rd party POV stories, and this was even better by using one of my favorite one-off characters. :)

Good job!

[info]isiscolo

October 23 2006, 15:20:14 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! I also have a thing for outsider POV, and I'm astonished at how many people here are fans of Christina.

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[info]isiscolo

October 23 2006, 16:32:30 UTC 5 years ago

Hee, you should - it's a little thin for a two-parter, but it's a lot of fun. Fraser is assigned to escort the 16-year-old daughter of a Canadian diplomat around Chicago, and she has, er, different ideas of fun than he does. Which include a fetish bar. And besides, James Allodi (Dan from Wilby Wonderful) is in it - see?

[info]j_s_cavalcante

October 24 2006, 03:33:58 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, lovely! *Melts!* Because Ray and Fraser, with rings, and out together--in more ways than one :)--and Christina a singer! Yay. She discovered nightclubs really were her thing, eh? And Fraser, so "all in a day's work" about what he went through with that former brat! LOL Good for her that she did the unexpected thing and left the high-society-diplomatic-LONELY life to Daddy.

I'm hearing Holly Cole in my head--Christina would have a similar voice, too! (Not difficult to hear it in my head, as I play the DS soundtracks in the car all the time. My kids love them, too.)

What a great double episode to take off from. Love it! I don't remember ever reading Christina fic before. (Though I don't read a lot of F/V, so I don't know what's been done there.)

And Ray understood her. I LOVE that. {{{hugs}}} This is great.

[info]isiscolo

October 24 2006, 04:17:37 UTC 5 years ago

Hee, obviously the Holly Cole soundtrack influenced my thinking about Christina's choice of career. I started imagining her as a diplomat, then thought - nah, she's going to want to rebel against that all, do something different!

So I hope you forgive me for not writing more Rae and doing this instead. Back to it, though!

[info]bluebrocade

October 26 2006, 04:23:37 UTC 5 years ago

Great idea! Very nice!

[info]isiscolo

October 26 2006, 16:47:01 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you kindly!

[info]justabi

November 30 2006, 22:44:27 UTC 5 years ago

Awww, she remembered him. That is awesome. And I love how totally cool Fraser and Ray are up there. *happy*

[info]isiscolo

November 30 2006, 23:14:48 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you kindly!
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