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school challenge by [info]visionshadows

In which Ray has trouble letting go, Fraser is stern, and someone goes to school. Set in the Picture in a Frame universe. About 750 words. Huge thanks to the always wonderful [info]tigs for her beta. :)



"Ray," Fraser said calmly, looking at his watch. "We really are going to be late."

"I know, I know," Ray said as he tugged on Emma's jumper and straightened her skirt. "I just want her to be ready."

"I *am* ready, Daddy," Emma said with a heavy sigh. "I'm a big girl."

"And we've discussed this at length," Fraser reminded him. "Emma needs to be in school especially since you've got Gabriel to deal with as well."

Ray scowled as he straightened up. "I *know*, Fraser. I'm just nervous, okay. My little girl is going to her first day of school."

Emma tugged on his hand comfortingly. "It's okay, Daddy."

"I don't know how the two of you can be so calm about this," Ray said with a sigh, squeezing Emma's hand in return. "Are you sure you have everything you need?"

"I got my backpack and my pencils and my lunch," Emma said, holding up the pink Tinkerbelle backpack she had somehow convinced Fraser to buy her. "I can go to school."

"Then we should go to school." Ray looked at the front entrance of the Sir Alexander MacKenzie elementary school. "Right now."

"Walking into the school will make it easier, Ray." Fraser pushed him gently towards the school.

"She was doing really well with me as her teacher," Ray said as they walked towards the school, Emma tugging hard on his hand in her excitement to get inside.

"You have a destructive one-year old at home right now."

"He's not *that* destructive."

Emma looked up at Ray. "Daddy, he ate my crayons."

"Okay, so he's slightly destructive," Ray sighed. "But not as destructive as Bronco."

"Well I hope our son isn't as destructive as a puppy." Fraser said dryly as he opened the front door for Ray and Emma. "Now, Emma's classroom is the third door on the left."

"Corporal Fraser!"

Fraser turned, his posture straightening immediately. "Yes?"

"I'm Maggie Snow," the young woman said, holding out her hand. "I'm Emma's teacher."

"It's a pleasure to make your acquaintance," said Fraser, shaking her hand politely. "This is Emma Fraser and Ray Kowalski, her other father."

Maggie turned to Ray and stuck her hand out, still smiling. "I've heard a lot about you."

"Oh yeah," Ray said wryly as he shook her hand. "It's that other father thing. Throws people for a loop."

Maggie laughed. "Well Corporal Fraser is the first male Mountie we've had stationed here who has a husband instead of a wife."

Fraser cleared his throat and swiped his thumb over his eyebrow. Ray looked at him with a grin. "You're embarrassing him, Ms... Snow?"

"Maggie is fine," Maggie said before kneeling down to look at Emma. "It's a pleasure to meet you, Emma."

"Hi," Emma said softly, hiding behind Ray's leg now.

Maggie's smile was warm and welcoming as she held out a hand to Emma. "We're very happy to have you joining our class."

Emma smiled a little tentatively before shaking Maggie's hand. "My aunt's name is Maggie too."

"Then it will be easy for you to remember my name," Maggie said, taking her hand as she stood up again. "Are you ready to go to see your classroom?"

"Can we come too?" asked Ray hopefully.

"I think Emma's old enough to do this on her own," Maggie said, looking at Emma with another smile. "However, I'll hopefully see the both of you at parents night in a few weeks."

"Of course," Fraser said immediately, putting a firm hand on Ray's back to push him back towards the front door. "We wouldn't miss it."

"I'll be here to pick you up," Ray promised. "If you need anything, you can call me. I'll be here immediately."

Emma sighed and looked up at Maggie. "Daddy's a worrier."

Maggie laughed and led Emma down the hall. "I can tell."

"Oh hell," Ray said with a sigh as Fraser led him back outside. "I'm going to be the parent she doesn't want to deal with, aren't I?"

"Nonsense." Fraser coughed a little and cracked his neck. "It's perfectly normal."

"You ran a background check on her, right?"

Fraser looked at him incredulously. "Would I use my position to do something so nefarious? She's a teacher, Ray. I'm quite sure she was screened before she was hired."

"So the background check was clean," Ray said as he opened the door to their truck. "That's good to know."

Fraser sighed and slid behind the wheel. "Squeaky."
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[info]bluebrocade

May 14 2006, 05:54:05 UTC 6 years ago

I remember the first one! I loved it. And this follow-up -- or prequel? -- is terrific. ♥

[info]visionshadows

May 14 2006, 05:55:59 UTC 6 years ago

Technically prequel. I kind of jump around with this series. *coughs* None of which I've posted of course. Heh.

Glad you liked this one!

[info]j_s_cavalcante

May 14 2006, 06:03:56 UTC 6 years ago

"You ran a background check on her, right?"

Fraser looked at him incredulously. "Would I use my position to do something so nefarious? She's a teacher, Ray. I'm quite sure she was screened before she was hired."

"So the background check was clean," Ray said as he opened the door to their truck. "That's good to know."

Fraser sighed and slid behind the wheel. "Squeaky."


HEE! That is so THEM! That Fraser'd do it, that Ray would know he'd do it, and that Fraser would make the token protest. LOL! You have them nailed dead to rights.

I adore Ray and Fraser as parents. Emma's a doll. Love "the other father thing."

I'm off to find whatever else you've written in this "universe." I want more! Can't wait to read about the destructive one-year-old, the dog...and how this all came to be. I hope you wrote that much!

*loves this so much*

Another great bedtime fic tonight! Thanks for posting!

[info]visionshadows

May 14 2006, 06:06:06 UTC 6 years ago

So far only one other fic has been posted for the universe, but about three more are in progress. I just can't seem to finish anything.

I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :D

[info]sam80853

May 14 2006, 06:14:17 UTC 6 years ago

Oh my ... that's utterly sweet!

"So the background check was clean," Ray said as he opened the door to their truck. "That's good to know."

[info]visionshadows

May 14 2006, 06:16:18 UTC 6 years ago

Hehe. Thank you! :)

[info]bertybertle

May 14 2006, 07:42:18 UTC 6 years ago

Warm fuzzies on a Sunday morning! Perfect. Thanks for posting this little gem.

[info]visionshadows

May 14 2006, 16:14:41 UTC 6 years ago

I'm glad it gave you warm fuzzies! Thank you. :)

[info]eledhwenlin

May 14 2006, 09:40:22 UTC 6 years ago

*squee* That... that is SO cute. Ray worrying and Fraser not worrying, but only because he ran a background check on the teacher.

Sososo cute.

How many stories are there actually in the PiaF universe? I only found "A passing feeling".

[info]visionshadows

May 14 2006, 16:15:21 UTC 6 years ago

At this point in time, that's the only one posted, but there are ... 3 more in progress. I'm having a terrible time finishing things these days. :/

I'm so happy you enjoyed this one! :)

[info]akite

May 14 2006, 11:28:35 UTC 6 years ago

Awwww...why is this the only fandom in which I really enjoy the kidfic? I guess it's because RayK would make such a wonderful daddy. Sweet story.

[info]visionshadows

May 14 2006, 16:16:07 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you! And yeah, RayK is so daddy material. I love kidfic in this fandom. :)

[info]springwoof

May 14 2006, 12:59:16 UTC 6 years ago

Hee! I loved your Fraser in this... "Squeaky" Ha!
and I loved little Emma: "Daddy's a worrier."
you are very clever...

[info]visionshadows

May 14 2006, 16:16:38 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[info]shrewreader

May 14 2006, 14:20:23 UTC 6 years ago


Oh, this is -WONDERFUL!!!-

Thank you so much for posting this -- you said you had 1 or 2 other bits posted? URLs? please?

(and I'd like to volunteer to beta!)

[info]visionshadows

May 14 2006, 16:19:04 UTC 6 years ago

So far one other bit is posted. I'm having a terrible time finishing the other ones that are in progress. The first one is located over here: Northwest Passage. The story is called 'A Passing Feeling.'

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. :) And if I end up needing another beta reader, I will definitely tag you.

[info]grey853

May 14 2006, 15:54:40 UTC 6 years ago

LOL, this is so in character. I love the idea of the two of them being together and having kids. Don't know why, because I don't usually like kidfic, but this works. Thanks for sharing.

[info]visionshadows

May 14 2006, 16:19:25 UTC 6 years ago

I'm so glad it worked for you! Thank you for commenting. :)

[info]mickeymvt

May 15 2006, 02:30:23 UTC 6 years ago

Very cute! I adore the idea of them being parents. And Ray being the worry-wart. You wouldn't think that of him at first, but it's soooo plausible.

[info]visionshadows

May 15 2006, 03:04:42 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

[info]muppetk

August 20 2006, 17:18:45 UTC 5 years ago

Emma sighed and looked up at Maggie. "Daddy's a worrier."

*snickers madly* Definitely my favorite line!

I enjoyed this one very much... I got the impression from one of the comments that there's more to this series? Nifty!

[info]visionshadows

August 21 2006, 23:53:56 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! And there's one more section up on my website. I'm growing less and less optimistic about the other parts seeing the light of day since I seem to have no dS muse anymore. :(

[info]muppetk

August 23 2006, 05:33:11 UTC 5 years ago

I went and found the other piece immediately; I saw your link. :)

Sorry about the muse. :( Maybe Beth just needs to make a mountie oil:

Benton - Sexy Siberian Musk, Boot Leather, spruce and fir, sweetgrass, firewood smoke, attar of bleeding heart flowers, and a hint of Caribou musk. Add several dozen Inuit stories, a cranky near-sighted detective and shake thoroughly.

:D I'd buy it, at least I would if the boot note was subtle enough.

(I just like colliding fandoms a leeetle too much. Someday I'm sure I'll go postal and produce seriously fucked up crossovers.)

[info]devo79

October 24 2008, 04:22:53 UTC 3 years ago

I loved how Ray wanted to go with her to school. You can never be too careful :)

[info]visionshadows

October 24 2008, 12:43:48 UTC 3 years ago

Very true. :)

Thank you for the comment! It brought a smile to my face this cold morning. :)
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